The last dance

[sunkan]

http://www1.sulekha.com/mstore/sagribow/albums/default/the%20last%20dance.jpg
i got a runner up for this poem..sunkan

[tulsi34]

Sunkan, I don't have words to appreciAte your poem but can tell you, your poem made my eyes wet.

[dr.jyoti gupta]

the picture and poem go so well together.lovely treat!

[suchetamuni]

Sunkan, very romantic poem with a sad ending. Does it portray real story you have seen in your life?

[mukti]

sunkan, your words here are pouring our of your heater. Lovely poem.

[sunkan]

dear tulsi,
am very happy with ur comment felt that should be the effect of writing..

[sunkan]

thanku jyoti for your compliment...

[sunkan]

now sucheta you have made my day what a wonderful comment the sad endings are themost beautiful as they retain the basic essence of love and that is what i have brought out here, once u love some one that is for life and if one looses then every thing is lost is what i have brought out here..

[sunkan]

thanku mukti happy to see you here dear

[nidhik55]

Love and eternal peace is expressed in the form of dance and alst two lines gives complete meaning to your poem. Lovely poem dear.

[sunkan]

thanku nidhik,
i am very happy to see you enjoy here...

[pranati]

Sunkan I could not see the picture the other day so thought will read from home. But today fortunately I saw this one. I dont have words to praise you for the wonderful poem. Straight from the heart and a pure heart and a noble soul can come up with such a lovely poem. Just love you for that Sunkan my hugs for you.

[sunkan]

thanku pranati arent u a member in face book my latest one posted there, the competition should get over so i wait and then post it here

[poornima]

Sunkan, wonderful words tied up together to make a masterpiece.

[Julianna]

Dear Sundari,

Deeply moving ....pognant feelings captured in lovely phrases with exquisite imagery which is your trademark alone .....Your artistic talents hold total sway in such a perfect blend of colours ...a visual soul stirring presentation of lost love and yearning for blissful days long past.

warm regards
Julianna

[sunkan]

happy julianna,
thought you would never see this been waiting for a long time now, thanku for those words they mean a lot to me

[sulu2000]

Blissful love nad romance can be put together so beautifully only by you, Sunkan

[banishapa]

Dance with lust and dance with romance are two different things. Sunkan your poem shwos true love between two pure souls.